March 5, 2008

Dear Johnny,

I think the family vacation you should choose is a trip to Disneyland. That sounds like it would be a lot of fun.

You said you like to travel. By going to Disneyland, you would get to travel all the way from your home in Colorado, to California.

You also said you like rides. There are lots of different rides at Disneyland. You could ride on Space Mountain, Splash Mountain, and the Indiana Jones ride!

Disneyland is a great place for little kids too. There are tons of places your little brother and sister could visit. They could ride the Dumbo ride, visit Peter Pan’s house, or visit Toon Town.

Disneyland would be a great family vacation for you.

Sincerely,

Ms. Frasier

Remember to put the date on your paper.

You should always put Dear before the name of the person you’re writing to.

The first paragraph tells Johnny which vacation I’m recommending for him.

The second paragraph tells him the first reason why I think he should listen to my recommendation.

The third paragraph tell him my second reason for why he should go to Disneyland.

The 4^th paragraph tells him my third reason for going to Disneyland.

At the end of the letter, I remind him that I think he and his family should go to Disneyland.

End with Sincerely, or Cordially

Don’t forget your name!